Talk:Oh, My Love is Like a Red, Red Rose
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| Source | Madden, D (Ed.). (2002). A Pocketful of Poems. Vintage Books. |
| Contributor(s) | Bluesky1775 |
| Level of progress | Proofread once |
| Notes | When Bluesky1775 contributed this work, there was no source. newmanbe changed the work to match his source. |
| Proofreaders | newmanbe |
[edit] Burns' original
One Project Gutenberg proofread version is as follows:
CXLIX. A RED, RED ROSE.
Tune—“Graham’s Strathspey.”
[Some editors have pleased themselves with tracing the sentiments of this song in certain street ballads: it resembles them as much as a sour sloe resembles a drop-ripe damson.]
I. O, my luve’s like a red, red rose, That’s newly sprung in June: O, my luve’s like the melodie, That’s sweetly play’d in tune. II. As fair art thou, my bonnie lass, So deep in luve am I: And I will luve thee still, my dear, ’Till a’ the seas gang dry. III. ’Till a’ the seas gang dry, my dear, And the rocks melt wi’ the sun: I will luve thee still, my dear, While the sands o’ life shall run. IV. And fare thee weel, my only luve! And fare thee weel a-while! And I will come again, my luve, Tho’ it were ten thousand mile.
From:
- The Complete Works of Robert Burns: Containing his Poems, Songs, and Correspondence.
- With a New Life of the Poet, and Notices, Critical and Biographical
- by Allan Cunningham
PG also has this alternate version:
A Red, Red Rose
[Hear Red, Red Rose]
O my Luve's like a red, red rose,
That's newly sprung in June:
O my Luve's like the melodie,
That's sweetly play'd in tune.
As fair art thou, my bonie lass,
So deep in luve am I;
And I will luve thee still, my dear,
Till a' the seas gang dry.
Till a' the seas gang dry, my dear,
And the rocks melt wi' the sun;
And I will luve thee still, my dear,
While the sands o' life shall run.
And fare-thee-weel, my only Luve!
And fare-thee-weel, a while!
And I will come again, my Luve,
Tho' 'twere ten thousand mile!
From:
- Poems And Songs Of Robert Burns
- (no other information given)
Either of these seems more reliable than the version currently used. --KSmrq 2007-06-20