adverb or conjunction, even the recasting of a sentence, may be necessary. But it is a safe statement that a gathering of commas (except on certain lawful occasions, as in a list) is a suspicious circumstance. The sentence should at least be read aloud, and if it halts or jolts some change or other should be made.
The smallest portion possible of curious interest had been awakened within me, and, at last, I asked myself, within my own mind...–Borrow.
None of the last three commas is wanted; those round at last are very unpleasant, and they at least should be omitted.
In questions of trade and finance, questions which, owing, perhaps, to their increasing intricacy, seem...–Bryce.
Perhaps can do very well without commas.
It is, however, already plain enough that, unless, indeed, some great catastrophe should upset all their calculations, the authorities have very little intention...–Times.
Indeed can do without commas, if it cannot itself be done without.
Jeannie, too, is, just occasionally, like a good girl out of a book by a sentimental lady-novelist.–Times.
If just is omitted, there need be no commas round occasionally. There may be a value in just; but hardly enough to compensate for the cruel jerking at the bit to which the poor reader is subjected by a remorseless driver.
Thus, their work, however imperfect and faulty, judged by modern lights, it may have been, brought them face to face with...–Huxley.
The comma after thus is nothing if not pompous. And another can be got rid of by putting it may have been before judged by modern lights.
Lilias suggested the advice which, of all others, seemed most suited to the occasion, that, yielding, namely, to the circumstances of their situation, they should watch...Scott.
Omit namely and its commas.
Shakespeare, it is true, had, as I have said, as respects England, the privilege which only first-comers enjoy.–Lowell.
