Talk:A Collection of Poems/The Passionate Pilgrime
Latest comment: 5 years ago by Lmstearn in topic My flocks feed not, my ewes breed not: Alternate
My flocks feed not, my ewes breed not: Alternate
[edit]Another well worn version of the lines following the opening:
"All is amiss. Love's denying, Faith's defying, Heart's renying,"
These days renying is not used much, hence the text-however the difference of meaning in "Love's denying" and "Love is dying" maybe of some concern.--Lmstearn (talk) 06:19, 10 October 2018 (UTC)