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full stop

In "Captain Brink" (first section), column 2, paragraph 5 ("When he had..."), line 2 starts "Here. you lazy, somnolent lout." (emphasis added); the first full stop should be a comma. --Yodin^T 18:46, 6 December 2015 (UTC)

centre

In "The Man Who Lived Twice" (third section), column 1, paragraph 2 ("When I awoke..."), line 2 has "centre" (British spelling); with the magazine published in the U.S., should this be "center" instead? --Yodin^T 18:46, 6 December 2015 (UTC)

A. D

In "The Man Who Lived Twice" (third section), column 2, line 4 has "the year 8117 A. D—" (emphasis added); should there be a second dot after the "D"? --Yodin^T 18:46, 6 December 2015 (UTC)

full stop outside brackets

In "What Do You Know?" (last section), question 1 ends with a full stop outside the brackets "(See page 693)." (emphasis added), unlike all the other questions. --Yodin^T 18:59, 6 December 2015 (UTC)

in rate of passage of time

In "What Do You Know?" (last section), question 2 is: "Can there be a variation in rate of passage of time and how is it shown?" (emphasis added); should "in rate of passage of time" be "in the rate of the passage of time" (perhaps abbreviated to save space)? --Yodin^T 18:46, 6 December 2015 (UTC)